Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Edited edition- compare and contrast...

Good morning/afternoon ladies and gentlemen, today I am writing this piece of writing because I want to talk about the 3 following camps which are camp big apple, Ranch west camp and head start splash.

Firstly, I personally chose the ranch west camp because in camp big apple, we stay for 3 weeks, in ranch west camp, we stay for 4 weeks and head start splash is 5 weeks. The reason is that 4 weeks is just 1 month like this GLPS camp but 3 week is too short and 5 weeks is too long so 4 weeks is just OK.

Secondly, in camp big apple, its just an english camp. And for head start splah camp you go to the beach so you can't concentrate. But for Ranch West camp, you get to learn what you want to study do you get interests in studying.

lastly, In camp big apple, we live in a dormitory so you will miss your parents. And for Head start splash camp, even though you have your parents, you will not be able to concentrate well, but for ranch west camp, you are in a home-stay so you will be good to study.

So I think Ranch West camp is better than the rest 2 camps.

Sunday, August 14, 2011

Friday, August 12, 2011

Summary, Pharapraze-North Korea fires again...

Today, our relationship with North Korea is getting more worst because of all the missiles shooting from 2 different koreas. Again , on Wednesday, North Korea shot Yeong Peong island again as they did last year. Its very sad news to hear but apparently, the president of both koreas are saying that this is another way of calling in to another war. If this war happens, their seems like its going to be another World War3. So I am very sad and everybody as people living in South Korea should worry.

ORIGINAL POST:

South Korea warned today that it will unleash "enormous retaliation" if North Korea launches fresh attacks against its territory.
North Korean troops bombarded Yeonpyeong, an island in disputed waters, with dozens of rounds of artillery earlier today, reportedly killing two South Korean soldiers and injuring around 20 people.
Seoul placed its military on its highest non-wartime alert level, scrambling F-16 fighter jets to the western sea and returning fire, officials said. It warned that the attack was a violation of the armistice that ended the Korean war in 1953.
The South Korean president, Lee Myung-bak, who convened an emergency security meeting shortly after the initial bombardment, said an "indiscriminate attack on civilians" could never be tolerated.
"Enormous retaliation should be made, to the extent that [North Korea] cannot make provocations again," he said.
The assault is one of the most serious in the decades since the war, given the involvement of civilians, although previous firefights around the disputed maritime border have resulted in a higher number of casualties.
In a short statement carried by the official KCNA news agency, the North said the South had fired first – presumably in reference to a live-fire drill being carried out as part of annual military exercises. It said it had repeatedly warned the South not to go ahead with the drill.

Skills Post 2

PHARAPHASING:SHARK ATTACKS
 Every body has a dream of going to the beach one day to swim but everybody is frightened about the shark attacks.It is more likely to get stucked by lighting than getting attacked by shark. In coastal states in U.S about 180 people get stucked by lighting but only 11 people were attacked by sharks. In 11 people, only 1 people will be fatal.

SUMMURIZING:BEAR ATTACKS
 A lots of people go hiking in the wood of North America and fear of being attacked by fear. But, chances of getting attacked by bears are extremely low. Instead, bear will go away! Having a car crash on your way is more likely than being attacked by a bear. If you are still worried, you can reduce the chances by traveling in a group amd always try to protect your-self from anything dangerous.

Monday, August 8, 2011

Angry Birds

Every one enjoys angry bird.For the people that don't know about angry bird, it is a game of distance and killing little monsters by birds. each bird has a special knowledge.The reason every body thinks that it is cool and fun is because of this see the video up the top...

Friday, August 5, 2011

An essay of food...

From this URL I got a picture:http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519_13736900.html5,
This picture has a family with a bunch of food.It has a picture of pizzas, potato chips, drinks such as cola and many more food.
I see more foods that are yummy too, and they are such things like hams,pasta, tomatoes,milk and many more.
 The reason why I chose this picture is because it made me hungry and I had a feeling to be in the family.

First, I think this family is a rich house not a poor hous4e because in this world, there are a lot of people and houses that are dying because they have nothing to eat and nothing to drink.So having this much to eat is I should say that they are a rich family.

Lastly, I think they will be just in health because if they eat to much fastfood, their health goes down so I see that they are eating mostly healthy food so I wish i was in this family and be family.

Thursday, August 4, 2011

Chain Writing

Once upon a time, a boy called "Tony Lee" was doing a pop-song contest. But then Tony felt sleepy so he fainted.Then, suddenly a dragon came out and breathed out fire. He ran to the under body of the dragon. He tried to call 119 but his Iphone was crushed too. For 24 hours , Tony was crushed in the land with a stupid, ill, dirty and nasty smell. But Tony suddenly had a good idea. He started to dig and made a hole with a crushed Iphone .Under, there was water. Tony drank the water.He lived there 12 years. After that he became Bumblebee. To fight with him, the monster Jacob came out to fight with him. But Jacob was too strong so Bumblebee lost.